Hey guys so for this weeks task we have to talk about our favourite poem so this is what this is.
This poem is about staying after school (at my old school)
When I was younger
I had a choice
Walk home in the rain
Or stay at school
The sound of the vacuum
And the dishwasher frantically
Cleaning dishes
Running from class to class
Everything is empty
Except for the
Teachers laughing
As they talk about tomorrow
Walking slowly back
To the office seeing
Rain ricochet off the ground
The occasional umbrella
Abandoned. Feeling damp
Until an explosion of warmth
Surrounds me. Being covered
In a fuzzy towel then the smell
Of hot chocolate and cookies
As coffee beans were put into
Coffees and marshmallows
put in milos. Then the
Smell of dishwashing liquid
As another load goes on
And more dishes are washedI like this poem because it describes my normal after noon at my old school when it was raining.
So that was this weeks task
Be Nice To People
-Caitlin
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Wow your poem is so good!
ReplyDeletethat was good and very descriptive
ReplyDeletehey that was a great poem! good job!
ReplyDeleteSounds like a good memory, am I right...?
ReplyDeleteNICE POST CAITLIN!!!
ReplyDeleteI LOVE THAT POEM
Very well written poem, Miss Lamont. Well done.
ReplyDeletenice poem, great job
ReplyDeletegood job i liked your poem
ReplyDeleteGREAT POEM CAITLIN!
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