Sunday, 6 September 2015

Best Poem

Aloha


Hey guys so for this weeks task we have to talk about our favourite poem so this is what this is.


This poem is about staying after school (at my old school)



When I was younger
I had a choice
Walk home in the rain


Or stay at school
The sound of the vacuum
And the dishwasher frantically


Cleaning dishes
Running from class to class
Everything is empty


Except for the
Teachers laughing
As they talk about tomorrow


Walking slowly back
To the office seeing
Rain ricochet off the ground


The occasional umbrella
Abandoned. Feeling damp
Until an explosion of warmth


Surrounds me. Being covered
In a fuzzy towel then the smell
Of hot chocolate and cookies


As coffee beans were put into
Coffees and marshmallows
put in  milos. Then the


Smell of dishwashing liquid
As another load goes on
And more dishes are washed






I like this poem because it describes my normal after noon at my old school when it was raining.


So that was this weeks task


Be Nice To People


-Caitlin


Orevwa



















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